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Old 05-19-05, 05:44 PM   #4
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word word word

man, if i wasn't so lazy to write now-a-days, i woulda loved to get in on this shit

some awesome stuff happening here boys, i think i liked onesteps the most...but LFS and big city, dont get me wrong, you had some nice stuff....LFS, elevating quite a bit, lines seemed a little long which slacked your flow a little, but nice multies and well-thought out thoughts....big city, fuckin great flow man, haha, you always have one hilarious line man, in this one it was the closer.....but nice flow, good verse man.......onestep, i liked the way you wrote this, good flow, nice metas, structure was on which helped the consistency of the flow.....nice multies....shit was nice

word, keep up OG's!
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