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05-19-05, 04:41 PM | #1 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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"Words are Weapons" O.G. Remix
IP: AB23 98FF
Fair warning. This is long. Maximus: Patres! Three weeks from now, I will be harvesting my crops. Imagine where you will be, and it will be so. Hold the lines! Stay with me! If you find yourself alone, riding in the green fields with the sun on your face, do not be troubled. For you are in Elysium, and you're already dead! Brothers, what we do in life... Echoes in eternity. My words are weapons... I use them to crush my opponents, My words are weapons... I never show no emotion, My words are weapons... I use them to kill anyone steppin to me, My words are like weaponry on a record... Maximus: I knew a man who once said, 'Death smiles at us all. All a man can do is smile back.' LFS THE GREAT Spittin words that's weapons, using pencils like Smith and Wessens, Gettin you guessin on what letters will have this victim restin, Admit that your sweatin, like Summertime coat and mitten testin, Unfit for the setting, so my rap style has overwritten the lesson, Resubmit for reseting, not a tough guy but have passive aggression, Commit to regretting cuz the reformat calls for massive regression, Transmit the upsetting to show your talent is impassive posession, I permit your begetting accept that I cause reactive depression, Gettin tired of the same rhymes so I'm rearrangin the direction, lAt my discretion I flip switches on and off the multiple sucessions, Rap sessions I drop'll leave you with exchangable facial expressions, No need for your blessings, disregarded,I'm the epitamy of transgression, Slicing your womens dressings, simple division like arithmatic progression, Don't tell me ya confessions cuz I'll use it for your image compression, My wage concession is like stock tips, your views of me are a form of obsession, Your special sessions are nuttin but sad idiot savants like retarded depression, My words are weapons... I use them to crush my opponents, My words are weapons... I never show no emotion, My words are weapons... I use them to kill anyone steppin to me, My words are like weaponry on a record... Proximo: Win the crowd and you'll win your freedom Maximus: I will win the crowd. I will give them something they've never seen before. BIGCITY ....yo, im holdin the four, soldier of war, hopin for more blow in ya door, City is sick, my flow is adored miserable boy, these mighty missiles employed empty ya chest,n leave u wit a visceral void my typical toys, they fill me wit mystical joy u could never catch sight of my invisible ploys If you hatin, than these dum-dums beat em up you MC's on a plate is like "yum yum eat em up" and you crazy, if you thought the young gun needed luck Wit my black mask n gloves, im someone creepin up I could neva be wack, i keep the treble intact girls addicted to the dick, like its congenital crack my levels at max, im brash wit incredible acts i spit smouldering shit that make the Devil retract u aint ballin, what i look like believin a slob? last time u "threw up dough" was ya pizza hut job... My words are weapons... I use them to crush my opponents, My words are weapons... I never show no emotion, My words are weapons... I use them to kill anyone steppin to me, My words are like weaponry on a record... Maximus: At my signal... Unleash hell... ONESTEPBEYOND Beyond the seriousness I'm on some delerious shit, Appear to be with 27 glocks but its a serious glitch, Mysterious kids with serious wits, our imperious clique, Ain't a question when we mark our territory, period bitch... I deserve respect, learned intellect to keep my words in check, Then my verse is set a blaze..... Kirk perfects each verb in text, Preserve the rest, serve it when theres multiple herbs to wreck, Turn and jet if ya concerned OneStep'll have ya burned to death, I've earned this rep through O.G., im not too concerned of rest, Heard at best through the site, wasn't placed under herbs or vets, My weapon isn't a Wessen..... its more like my words are techs, That burn ya flesh, Kirk is blessed... ready to disperse some text, Conserve my breath cousin... cause when theres herds of vets, I reverse their text and turn it backwards and yet to work a sweat, My word plays best... structure? never see a verse is stretched, LFS spazzes, B.C.'s magic, and my habits makes me the third asset, Some complain that Im an herb at best, or say thats Kirks perplexed, Even though I've served the best I'm still unable to earn respect, And I've heard the rest..... So you ain't even gotta refer OneStep, I'll return the tech, and confirm my rep.. cause my words are weap.'s.. My words are weapons... I use them to crush my opponents, My words are weapons... I never show no emotion, My words are weapons... I use them to kill anyone steppin to me, My words are like weaponry on a record... Maximus: You would fight me? Commodus: Why not? Do you think I am afraid? Maximus: I think you've been afraid all your life. |
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05-19-05, 05:00 PM | #2 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
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05-19-05, 05:31 PM | #3 | |||||||
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
DAMn man thanx for da WARNIN LoL! But Nice man Not the First Or Last I Seen That Was nice N typed By You!Everythin looked Pretty Good to me!Overall 8/10
LFS nice Shyt 2 Man Pretty Good Verse!>>8/10 Big City Same 4 U That Was A killa Azz Thing Yall Did 2gether!>8/10 Go Check My OM out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191465 Holl Atcha boy! ~*~iLLuNaTiKz*~*~
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05-19-05, 05:44 PM | #4 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
word word word
man, if i wasn't so lazy to write now-a-days, i woulda loved to get in on this shit some awesome stuff happening here boys, i think i liked onesteps the most...but LFS and big city, dont get me wrong, you had some nice stuff....LFS, elevating quite a bit, lines seemed a little long which slacked your flow a little, but nice multies and well-thought out thoughts....big city, fuckin great flow man, haha, you always have one hilarious line man, in this one it was the closer.....but nice flow, good verse man.......onestep, i liked the way you wrote this, good flow, nice metas, structure was on which helped the consistency of the flow.....nice multies....shit was nice word, keep up OG's!
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05-19-05, 07:13 PM | #5 | ||||
Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7402 AF51
Wow @ B.C. and OSB...Some of the nicest shit I have ever seen from you guys...LFS, keep spittin flames man, this shit was disgusting
I would've loved to get in this, but blah 10/10 |
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05-20-05, 02:54 PM | #6 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
uppin...........
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05-20-05, 09:02 PM | #8 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
uppin this shit....my verse has curves like an iceberg lol
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05-22-05, 01:19 PM | #11 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
uppin............
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05-22-05, 01:26 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
This was pretty tight nice osb..
All of your structures were decent.. All had nice feeling and good wordplay.. Vocab was decent , could have been alot better.. But this was a very good piece..one of the best ive seen from you ... Keep it up . And i hope to see more from you later on
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05-23-05, 09:27 PM | #13 | |||||||
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IP: CE10 8C0C
this was a dope piece............woulda been better if i had wanted to get on it..........lol......j.k
good multi's, flow, metas, and vocab......this was an all out nice piece.......keep it up OG's
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