Voted For: Bonecollector

dayummmm,,,,

tephlon...decent vers the d'r lines and punches are played these days man, you had maybe 1 personal that i saw it was decent, the flow was okay but choppy in some areas,decent structure,your punches were mediocre some hard but some not hard enough,i dont know your opener was wack,and you had a decent ending...

bonecollecter...your personals with all his names and name changes were brilliant the way you used it against him nice shit,good wordplay,your punches were strong in alot of areas but decent in the others,the flow was nice,your structure was decent too,i think you came hard in this so props...

overall- i think both of you can do better on your structures....i dont likee the way they're formatted but maybe thats just me,anyways bonecollecter came harder and more wittier than teph did so this goes to him....cool battle bonecollecter just wanted to win more, and you can see that by the way he dropped it was nice...

v/bonecollecter

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