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Old 05-16-05, 10:08 AM   #1
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Tephlon vs Bonecollector

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Old 05-18-05, 08:04 AM   #2
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Tephlon has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 08:04 AM.
 
Old 05-18-05, 08:41 AM   #3
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i'ma text some ''Blind'' spits an they still makin more Sense..
fuckers Far from Phat, all your skill weight up too is ''Pence''
ya pun'z are neither ''here or there''...so they just sit on the Fence!
so.....lets take an ''Indeph'' look at your battle Sequence..
not one noticable victory, not beaten a vet in your history..
all u ever do is ''medal with kids''...like a Scooby Doo Mystery!
i know you aint dissin-me....
the realness got him shook like a Clostaphobic in an Air Vent..
this fuckin dickriders more ''Camp'' than a row of Tents!
a dyslexic givin you propps is the only time ya ''Number 1'
fuck it! let my pops nut in ya eye, so u can see ''where i'm from!''
when its done, i'ma collect ya Bones, call me the Archeologist
you bout as ''tight'' as ya asshole when its parked-by-6-dicks
dogg? naw bitch, you bark like a chick, fuckin pussy cat, u must-be-that
cause....like ''pockets'' parents...
.......your ''fam'' disgrace you an shouldda wore a Jimmy-Hat!
new era on RV, place the welcome Mat, an therez no ''room'' for '6 feet'
i'ma cut y'all short, hand ya gang some flip-flops, so y'all see [da-feet]Defeat.
me n you dont ever wanna meet, cause da only beef u servin is Subway.........
i'ma cut off ya ears, stick 'em ta the Block..
.............then this suburban kid can really hear what the Hood-Say!
Its a good-day, got u on chill like an Ice Cube, so i hope u hold a mack-10, right?
you should give up rhymin, an just stick ta what u do best an mod the Open Mic


Explanation:
we weight in lbs (Pounds)...an the british ''cent'' is called ''pence''....rest yall can work out, just wanted ta clarify that line for yall
Camp = gay
parked = fucked
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Old 05-18-05, 11:28 PM   #4
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Old 05-20-05, 12:03 AM   #5
Kawn Flixx
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You "Dope" When It Comes To That, Anything "Type You Mention, Ive Owned It"....
Cuz I "Blaze This Dude" And "Smoke Dope" Like Fuckin "Drug Addicts"..
Watch As I Leave "Es Co. Burned Down" Like "Skate Stores Goin Up In Flames"*
Cus the only thing "sHoTTaBoy" Would win is the special olympic games..**
I Leave "Shot Back-fired"..Cuz Im Sending Shit "His Guns Cant Handle",Leds.....
Bone Leaves "Buck Hung" Like "Pro Hunters Hanging Up Dead Dear Heads"..
You changed your name more times then your wins and losses combined..
Can you stay with one or do you not "have a brain"?cus someone cant make up there mind
68-58 ..Seems you've possibly lost to everyone on this site.. to a huge extent..
How do you possibly think you can beat me when you cant pass Mayne Event!?
........you lost to yte girl and she's 4-11!... seems your highly overated..
Stop Newb bashing...If you keep coming at Vets...your records soon to look related..
.........Buck. has just been Shot...And Buried 6 Feet Deep what a shame
Now NoOne can remember who you are so how do you expect to get fame*
Cus The only ILL Dope'll get is if he Over Doses, Or Reads his Crews Name!


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*-Es Shoe Companey Is A Skating Brand
**-Look , he cant spell his old name , sorta how some one special would write
*Changes his name so much ppl dont remember who he was
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Old 05-20-05, 12:16 AM   #6
Valor
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Voted For: Bonecollector

dayummmm,,,,

tephlon...decent vers the d'r lines and punches are played these days man, you had maybe 1 personal that i saw it was decent, the flow was okay but choppy in some areas,decent structure,your punches were mediocre some hard but some not hard enough,i dont know your opener was wack,and you had a decent ending...

bonecollecter...your personals with all his names and name changes were brilliant the way you used it against him nice shit,good wordplay,your punches were strong in alot of areas but decent in the others,the flow was nice,your structure was decent too,i think you came hard in this so props...

overall- i think both of you can do better on your structures....i dont likee the way they're formatted but maybe thats just me,anyways bonecollecter came harder and more wittier than teph did so this goes to him....cool battle bonecollecter just wanted to win more, and you can see that by the way he dropped it was nice...

v/bonecollecter
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Old 05-20-05, 01:22 AM   #7
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Voted For: Bonecollector

You "Dope" When It Comes To That, Anything "Type You Mention, Ive Owned It"....
Cuz I "Blaze This Dude" And "Smoke Dope" Like Fuckin "Drug Addicts"..
5...played concept and rhymin was off a little!!
Watch As I Leave "Es Co. Burned Down" Like "Skate Stores Goin Up In Flames"*
Cus the only thing "sHoTTaBoy" Would win is the special olympic games..**
6...decent meta, gud play off old name!!
I Leave "Shot Back-fired"..Cuz Im Sending Shit "His Guns Cant Handle",Leds.....
Bone Leaves "Buck Hung" Like "Pro Hunters Hanging Up Dead Dear Heads"..
7...LMAO!!! this punch was funny!!! nice personal!!
You changed your name more times then your wins and losses combined..
Can you stay with one or do you not "have a brain"?cus someone cant make up there mind
6...decent personal, cud've been better!!
68-58 ..Seems you've possibly lost to everyone on this site.. to a huge extent..
How do you possibly think you can beat me when you cant pass Mayne Event!?
6...another nice punch, but cud be better!!
........you lost to yte girl and she's 4-11!... seems your highly overated..
Stop Newb bashing...If you keep coming at Vets...your records soon to look related..
7...LoL!!! decent personal!!!
.........Buck. has just been Shot...And Buried 6 Feet Deep what a shame
Now NoOne can remember who you are so how do you expect to get fame*
Cus The only ILL Dope'll get is if he Over Doses, Or Reads his Crews Name!
7...decent shit, prolly best part of the verse!!!

OVERALL: 44/60 (73%)



i'ma text some ''Blind'' spits an they still makin more Sense..
fuckers Far from Phat, all your skill weight up too is ''Pence''
5...weak opener on a played concept!!
ya pun'z are neither ''here or there''...so they just sit on the Fence!
so.....lets take an ''Indeph'' look at your battle Sequence..
5...nah, not a good play on his old name!!
not one noticable victory, not beaten a vet in your history..
all u ever do is ''medal with kids''...like a Scooby Doo Mystery!
7...LMAO!!! scooby doo is played but still funny!!
i know you aint dissin-me....
the realness got him shook like a Clostaphobic in an Air Vent..
this fuckin dickriders more ''Camp'' than a row of Tents!
6...decent, good meta!!
a dyslexic givin you propps is the only time ya ''Number 1'
fuck it! let my pops nut in ya eye, so u can see ''where i'm from!''
6...cud be better, but overall a nice punch!!
when its done, i'ma collect ya Bones, call me the Archeologist
you bout as ''tight'' as ya asshole when its parked-by-6-dicks
5...nah, that homo shit is played like fuck!!
dogg? naw bitch, you bark like a chick, fuckin pussy cat, u must-be-that
cause....like ''pockets'' parents...
.......your ''fam'' disgrace you an shouldda wore a Jimmy-Hat!
8...LMFAO!!!! funniest shit i seen in this verse!!
new era on RV, place the welcome Mat, an therez no ''room'' for '6 feet'
i'ma cut y'all short, hand ya gang some flip-flops, so y'all see [da-feet]Defeat.
7...decent wordplay, gud personal!!
me n you dont ever wanna meet, cause da only beef u servin is Subway.........
i'ma cut off ya ears, stick 'em ta the Block..
.............then this suburban kid can really hear what the Hood-Say!
5...no!! played concept that didn't work!!
Its a good-day, got u on chill like an Ice Cube, so i hope u hold a mack-10, right?
you should give up rhymin, an just stick ta what u do best an mod the Open Mic
6...ok personal, decent closer!!

OVERALL: 60/90 (67%)


no hate in this so dont complain!!! this was a close battle, bonez had a couple of played concepts but was pretty much consistent with his punches, not overly creative but decent. tephlon came good to, had a couple of nice lines and one real funny ass bar. only thing that let ya down was you had too many played concepts. i mean 6-UNLIMITED LINES, ya cud've just shortened ya drop and removed the played concepts and ya would have won, but overall bonez was better.

V/ - Bonez

RTF!!! links are in my battle stats, go find em!!!
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Old 05-20-05, 01:49 AM   #8
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Voted For: Bonecollector

aight yo dont make eitha of ya struktures like dat no mo battles like dis period

bonecollector-aight 1st off ya structure was shitty as hell period u had sum aight personals prolli da reason u took dis battle ya punches was a lil iffy nothin good realli sum was aight tho dem link shits plzz dont do dem no mo dont mean shit u had sum aight wordplay and nameplay on his alias ya shit was sloppy as hell tho yo ya 1st 2 barz aint even rhyme so it started off wakk da middle was kind of a blur sum of it was kool and it ended ok not dat good but ok

tephlon-yo i cant wait 4 our battle 2 go up ya shit was mad sloppy 2 ya punches was aight just like bones personals none aint c none n ya verse no wordplay ya strukture was a lil betta den bones but dey both was shitty ya verse started off kind of ok da middle was wakk period and it ended ok cum harder next time fix ya structure and cum harder

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Old 05-20-05, 02:33 AM   #9
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Voted For: Bonecollector


bonecollector:
You "Dope" When It Comes To That, Anything "Type You Mention, Ive Owned It"....
Cuz I "Blaze This Dude" And "Smoke Dope" Like Fuckin "Drug Addicts"..
^^^^^I LIKE DA CONCEPT WITH DA DOPE SHIT...BUT I DIDN'T LIKE DA WAY IT RYHMED..DECNT OPENER THO
Watch As I Leave "Es Co. Burned Down" Like "Skate Stores Goin Up In Flames"*
Cus the only thing "sHoTTaBoy" Would win is the special olympic games..**
^^^^GOOD PERSONAL..I WOULDN'T OF GOT DA 1ST LINE IF U AINT EXPLAIN IT
I Leave "Shot Back-fired"..Cuz Im Sending Shit "His Guns Cant Handle",Leds.....
Bone Leaves "Buck Hung" Like "Pro Hunters Hanging Up Dead Dear Heads"..
^^^WHOOO NICE PUNCH...VERY CLEVA
You changed your name more times then your wins and losses combined..
Can you stay with one or do you not "have a brain"?cus someone cant make up there mind
^^^^^ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL...LINE KIND OF STRETCHED THO
68-58 ..Seems you've possibly lost to everyone on this site.. to a huge extent..
How do you possibly think you can beat me when you cant pass Mayne Event!?
^^^EHHH DECENT PERSONAL
........you lost to yte girl and she's 4-11!... seems your highly overated..
Stop Newb bashing...If you keep coming at Vets...your records soon to look related..
^^^LMAOOOOOOOOOOO @ DA 1ST DAMM HE LOST 2 A GIRL DAT WAS 4-11 DATZ SAD...DIS PERSONAL HIT REAL HARD
.........Buck. has just been Shot...And Buried 6 Feet Deep what a shame
Now NoOne can remember who you are so how do you expect to get fame*
^^^^LOL DA SECOND LINE IS SO TRUE...GOOD PERSONAL
Cus The only ILL Dope'll get is if he Over Doses, Or Reads his Crews Name!
^^^^^??????WHERE'S DA NEXT LINE FAM LOL..

tephlon:
i'ma text some ''Blind'' spits an they still makin more Sense..
fuckers Far from Phat, all your skill weight up too is ''Pence''
^^^VERY WEAK OPENER
ya pun'z are neither ''here or there''...so they just sit on the Fence!
so.....lets take an ''Indeph'' look at your battle Sequence..
^^^SECOND LINE WAS GOOD A PERSONAL
not one noticable victory, not beaten a vet in your history..
all u ever do is ''medal with kids''...like a Scooby Doo Mystery!
^^^EHHH KIND OF CLEVA FAM....I NEVA SEEN DIS LINE GOOD SHIT
i know you aint dissin-me....
^^^^???????
the realness got him shook like a Clostaphobic in an Air Vent..
this fuckin dickriders more ''Camp'' than a row of Tents!
^^^NAH
a dyslexic givin you propps is the only time ya ''Number 1'
fuck it! let my pops nut in ya eye, so u can see ''where i'm from!''
^^^LMAOOOOO....NICE
when its done, i'ma collect ya Bones, call me the Archeologist
you bout as ''tight'' as ya asshole when its parked-by-6-dicks
^^^^NAH DIS WAS 2 GAY
dogg? naw bitch, you bark like a chick, fuckin pussy cat, u must-be-that
cause....like ''pockets'' parents...
.......your ''fam'' disgrace you an shouldda wore a Jimmy-Hat!
^^^LOL....VERY CLEVA
new era on RV, place the welcome Mat, an therez no ''room'' for '6 feet'
i'ma cut y'all short, hand ya gang some flip-flops, so y'all see [da-feet]Defeat.
^^^^1ST LINE WA SGOOD BUT DA SECOND FUKKED IT UP
me n you dont ever wanna meet, cause da only beef u servin is Subway.........
i'ma cut off ya ears, stick 'em ta the Block..
.............then this suburban kid can really hear what the Hood-Say!
^^^^GOOD
Its a good-day, got u on chill like an Ice Cube, so i hope u hold a mack-10, right?
you should give up rhymin, an just stick ta what u do best an mod the Open Mic
^^^DECENT CLOSER....

UHHH DIS WAS REALLY A CLOSE...BOTH OF YA'LL HAD SOEM GOOD SHIT 4REAL...BUT IMA HAVE 2 GO WITH BONE CUZZ HE HAD SOME FUNNY AND HARD HITTIN PERSONALS...TEPH HAD DA PUNCHLINES BUT I FEEL PERSONALS R BETTA BUT U GOTTA BALANCE IT OUT BUT BONE JUST HAD SOME REALLY PERSONALS IN DIS
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Old 05-20-05, 04:31 AM   #10
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LOL WTF @ 4 Votes already an the 4 people voting all my haters...........smh

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Old 05-20-05, 03:00 PM   #11
Kawn Flixx
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Old 05-20-05, 04:35 PM   #12
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Voted For: Bonecollector

Highlights:

Watch As I Leave "Es Co. Burned Down" Like "Skate Stores Goin Up In Flames"*

How do you possibly think you can beat me when you cant pass Mayne Event!?

........you lost to yte girl and she's 4-11!... seems your highly overated..

Bone Leaves "Buck Hung" Like "Pro Hunters Hanging Up Dead Dear Heads"..

not one noticable victory, not beaten a vet in your history..
all u ever do is ''medal with kids''...like a Scooby Doo Mystery!

when its done, i'ma collect ya Bones, call me the Archeologist

No No's:

Cus the only thing "sHoTTaBoy" Would win is the special olympic games..**

Cuz I "Blaze This Dude" And "Smoke Dope" Like Fuckin "Drug Addicts"..

i'ma cut y'all short, hand ya gang some flip-flops, so y'all see [da-feet]Defeat.

fuck it! let my pops nut in ya eye, so u can see ''where i'm from!''

.......your ''fam'' disgrace you an shouldda wore a Jimmy-Hat!

Flow: Blah Who Cares
Punches: Bone
Personals: Bone
Wordplay: Tephlon
Metas: Neither
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Bone

Explanation: Eh Tephlon Had A Defeet Line Which Is Now The Most Played Out Concept On The Net And It Wasnt Even Flipped Good!! And The Special Olympics? Ive Seen That Like A Million Times Here On RV Now .. NO MORE SPECIAL OLYMPIC LINES!!!! .. But Bone Got This More Consistent Less Played And Came With Some Coo Personals That Took It For Him....
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