Voted For: Compose

compose- you had a consistent solid verse, the emotion was potent throughout your piece. i felt your imagery could have been improved upon though. your structure was on-point making it easy to follow. the vocabulary was tight, it wasn't so complicated that it affected your flow so it was cool.
my favourite bar out the whole drop had to be..
the women i speak about...the ones who bother continuously
cuz she's in love...for a person in the midst of her dreams
so, i'd give you 80% .
tony green- your drop wasn't as consistent as composes, but you had a nice story. it was worded well but because some lines were uneven it fucked up your flow. your vocabulary was decent, quite basic but you pulled it off. emotion wasn't strong, and i felt neither was the imagery. just elevate on emotion and imagery and you'll do fine as a topical head. overall this was a decent piece.
my favourite bar..
I sit and talk to some of my old hustlers off the block.
They like Lil Steve got shot, and Markus got million dollar yhatts.
i give you 50% .
so...
v/compose.
he just came harder in all areas. no hate tony. rtf in my sig.

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