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Old 05-21-05, 09:36 AM   #24
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Voted For: Carlton Banks

weell wasnt this a one sided battle lol....

ne wayz imma break it down...

ca$per...

u go thinkin u are dope but u aint as good as u think u need to stop tht coz its getting out of hand lol... u had some good lines in there but none of them really stood out.. overall it was a bad verse, u jus lacked the hard punches, structure and flow was real gd u got that on lock u just need to practise punches....
overall 65/100

carlton banks...

now this verse was good man... u had some funny lines in there they were all dope but that elevated line i played, you need to work on your strucute but other than that your verse was dope man keep it up...

overall 87/100

good job keep it up and keep elevatin both of you... you can only get better pz...
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