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Old 05-21-05, 09:07 PM   #15
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lmao.....poor children, every nigga dat posted feed in here tried 2 get wit u. they didn't even drop decent feedback.anyway tho

nice piece, i noticed word play and rhyme scheme throughout it tha most. focus on ya structure tho, try 2 make every line match up. rtf, i got a drop featurin LFS comin real soon......1
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