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Evolution
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Voted For: P.aradox
ight close battle here imma break it down....
skitzo...
Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back
To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that
^^ good opener alryt punch... 6/10
But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out
But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about
^^ played conecept had potential thogh 5/10
You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude
Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you
^^ nicee line decent wordplay 7/10
overall i gfive you 18/30 u have got potentail just keep practising and you will get far u only had one dicent punch in the whole verse and the rest of it was what brought u down just stay consistant thropught your battle and u will wi... flwo and structure was decent though....
P.aradox
Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor……
Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more…
^^ good opener decent punch 6/10
Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath…..
Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath……
^^ alryyt punch not effective though 5/10
Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water…..
Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……...
^^ decent closure good name play and good punch 8/10
overall i give u
19/20 u just skraped this but you came out on top overall it was a gd verse u have got potential to be super dope just keep wrkin on your punches and you will get there
rtf links in the sig... vote fairly!! pzz
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