this was ok. wasnt that WOW type writin poem but it's ok. first off the structure could be tightened up a lil more then what it is. some lines i feel were played through alot of poems iive read. but probably through this site, it might be nice to tis site, but the word play was very nice, had some nice qoutables in this. one of dem i do like it

[qoute]You're a beauty of nature like the flowers that sway and that soaring birds[/qoute]

^^^very nice line used.