Voted For: Stanza

Wow, kinda sad that Stanza beat you with half of the lines.

Stanza- Aight this verse really wasn't that good, but you actually threw punches and didn't just self glorify. Work on putting in personals in your verses because just punches can be bitten and aren't as effective. Wordplay was ok, but don't use " ". Overall, work on personals.

Big- Aight, you have some pretty funny punchlines, but the prob is that they were more lines then punch. You were somewhat witty, but you self glorified a lot and also you just stated, you didn't punch. Work on more original stuff as well. Mase is played, never knew Ashanti had sideburns though.

"Stanza is too long let it be cut down to lines
It's not hard to find the purple dinosaur now a days"
^^Sometin like that, don't just state the personal or whatever. See how I just played off his name and colors? I didn't just say it. You have potential, but you need to get some help.

v-Stanza

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