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Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
ight this was a one sided battle in my opinion here is why...
khaoz theory:
i thought u had some really witty lines you hit your opponent wit nearly every punch good job man... try working on your syllable count and fix up your structure dont put a capital letter at the beggining of each word it makes it harder to read and it fucks up your structure other than that u are coming along nicely....
ca$per:
man what happened here u had the lines they just needed to be worded better man your structure was on point along with the flow... u just need to word your verses better and think of more witty punches otyher than that your verse was good...
ight imma give this to khaoz theiry becuz he had harder punches and more witty lines.....
/khaoz theory
ight take into count what i just said man it will help you both alot keep spitting and you'll get better....
RTF links in the sig pick a battle.... pzzz
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