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Originally Posted by Atticus
That Was Pretty Nice...
OSB, And Big City Had Overall Very Nice Verses...
But LFS, You've Gotta Work On It A Bit...
You're Structure Is Entirely To Streched...
And You Flow Can Get Boring Cuz It Lacks Internal Rhyming...
But The Actual Content Of The Verse Was On Point...
Overall This Was A Good Piece, But...
I Didnt Like The Little Quot Things As Hooks...
That Works VERY Nice On Audio But Its Corny On Text...
But Good Job Breaking Up The Verses...
None Of The Verses Were To Long...
All The Emcee's Meshed Pretty Well Except LFS...
I'd Give This Piece An Overall: 7.8/10
Good Job Eveyone, Keep It Up...
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