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IP:
Na, Fs You've Got Talent No Question...
But Your Work Isnt As Honed As The Other Emcee's You Were With...
You Just Need Work And You Could Be Great...
But On This Piece You Were Definately Overshadowed By More Expierienced Writers...
Keep Working Though, You'll Get To That Level...
Work On Shortening Your Lines And Using Internal Rhyming Especially...
Stay Up Kid...
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