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Evolution
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
lol this was a real close battle ihad to read each verse twice to make sure...
imma break it down...
sik wit it:
i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
^^ nice opener decent wordplay 7/10
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
^^ lol nice 7/10
There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
^^ not feelin this one 5/10
Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
^^ doesn't rhyme 4/10
I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
^^ ok closure couldav ben harder 5/10
ok i felt your verse wasn't as good as it couldav been... u sarted off wit some dope punches and then u started to come less consistant giving you the loss... u just need to stay consistant in your battles and then u'll be good....
28/50
khaoz:
Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
^^ good opener and wordplay 7/10
HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
^^ nice again 8/10
Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
^^ ok i spose 5/10
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
^^ haha dope wordplay 7/10
Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
^^ not really feelnig this one 4/10
overall i felt u came hard in this battle you had some dope wordplay and i enjoyed reading your verse you had some lines that made me laugh lol... just try to keep those punches gonig all the way through and you'll be sorted
31/50
im giving this to khaoz for havingt better wordplay and punches... keep droppen em homies no hate pz....
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