Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
lol very one sided... khaoz u have elevated alot since u joined props to you it took me like 1 year to elevate and u nearly as good as me but i was wacker than u so it evens out lol... n e wyz i felt u owned the shit out of him u had some good lines in there some were played somer wenrt but u did enough....
young... u nned help homie... sort out your structure
make your lines like this:
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instead of this:
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get me if u do that it will help on your structure get that right first and then get your punches in there... your punches wernt rlly hittin u had played concepts and u basically just need to think of better concepts and how to word them...
thats it
v/ khaoz
for having harder punches better structure and all over better verse...
keep droppin em you'll get better man trust me pzzzzzzzz
n no hate
