Ur ‘expressionless’, drawin blanks like tracin ya ‘face’
Ya mum only gave birth cos you were wastin her space
—5, decent punch
New to these surroundings, adjusting like blind babies
Shit when it comes to voting your even behind ladies
—1, not feeling this punch
Hope to fuck your reading this cos seeing is believing
Give sas a piece of his own, but im preferable 2 bleedin
—3, avg.
challenge me? Damn! You must be opposed to victory
Infact its quite intelligent, now you’ll go down in history
—2, that history line is played..

overall.. not ur best work here Prem, mostly ur whole
drop was pretty weak here, & maybe only one good punch
though, structure was okay, didn’t see any personas either
.. .. should’ve added some of that though 10/40

Prem's left cluthing at a broken future, & searching for inspirations attack.
Having said that, ya like a injecting farmer lookin for a needle inna haystack.
—5, decent opener
Ya inferior Prem, ya texting attributes are jus worthless.
& I kno P forsaw the L, so if my fate is merking you, jus watch me serve my purpose.
—1, not really a punch here
Don't try and fight it Prem, don't make ya demise delayed.
Cuz ya doom will be delivered...
Like you ordered the game from ebay!*
—4, decent wordplay, punch was aight
I'll uppercut ya chin & knock out ya tooth.
Cuz I be callin the shots..
Like the sniper outta "Phone Booth"!..**
—3, meh.. punch was avg.

overall – u had an aight drop here also.. punches were aight
some of them were weak, not really hardhitting.. didn’t see
any personas on ur opponent there.. had 1 decent wordplay
overall ur drop was okay.. 13/40

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