Originally Posted by lyricalflowz

peeping, flow goes blah in some parts only when the lines are stretched a bit. Other than that it's dope. Damn when you pick it up your flow is crazy hot. Lyrics are good. I love that hook, quality is alright, well it's good, I just dunno about it. 2nd verse, I'm not the type that likes a flow as of that, but you did good at what you do. Lyrics are dope. I'm thinking you should slow it down a bit so we can hear the words. It's hard to understand what your saying in most parts. Damn, I'm loving this beat, its really calm like. 3rd verse. Again flow gets choppy in some parts, and in parts seems like your talking. You seem to pick the flow back up though as the verse goes along. I love the way ya ended it though. ALl in All it could use a bit of work, but it's dope. Ya know? I've heard better from the both of ya'll.

PS: I was really feeling the lyrics though. Word