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Old 05-31-05, 08:03 AM   #29
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Voted For: FuxJustAWord



dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

Real Nice Wordplay Usin LL Songs In Da Openin Bar
Rest Ov Da Verse Wuz Good 2, U Stayed On Point Wid Da Personalz, Wordplay In Yo Punchez Wuz Good 2, Nice Consistant Flow, U Bought It Raw In Diz Battle, Not Much I Wuznt Feelin Dat Fade 2 Black Bar, Other Then That, A Good Solid Hard Hittin Verse Dawg

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

Iight Verse 2, Not Az Much Consistancy Az Fux, Few Linez U Builded Up Nicely But Then Da Punch Lacked, Propps 4Dat ''Be Bold But Dont Feed'' Line, Dat Wuz Nice, More Bars Lyke Dat 1 & U Wuld Ov Got Da Win

Vote/Fux=He Had Da More Consistant Flow, Rhymez Were Iight Frum Both, But Phenom Wuz Lackin Da Consistancy, Altho Fux Verse Wuznt Nuthin Special, It Had A Lil More Consistancy In Da Bars, Better Creative Wordplay 2...

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