Voted For: Daubs

ight close battle....

daubs i thought you had some good lines and some bad lines... you need to upyour vocab becuz the punches u r using now arnt rlly that hard hitting... i think u just edged this battle though, here is some of your lines i liked:

Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart....
Blowjob before the battle?
Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!!
^^ good wordplay and decent punch not really played

here is a line i didn't like:

Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first..
If ya girl was a sphere..
You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!!
^^ not really feelin it weak punch there

overall u had a strong enough verse to take the win, like i said think of better concepts for your punches and you'll be on your way!

khaoz:

damn man u have elevated alot since u came to this site man good job on that... all you need to do is match up your structure and you'll be alot better even with your punches the way they are now... here is 1 line i liked:

''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority!
U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority''
^^ this was a dope line man really feelin it

here is a line i didn't like:

Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew
Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame...
Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew!
^^ played out man if u had one punch like the first one you wouldav got this but u threw it away man

try to stay consistant throughout your battles man have them ard hitting punches from beginning to the end, then you will get it


v/ daubs for edging the punches, he had harder hitting punches and stayed consistant through this battle...

good job stay up this was a real close battle pz

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