Evolution
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IP:
Voted For: Mad Dog
i9ght this was a close battle but here is what i think went down....
Premanition:
1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?(*)
^^ nice filler, second line not so gd, y wud he take america??
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’(**)
^^ nice personal here good wordplay
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
^^ dont reallt get this one :S
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
nice name play here and good punch
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!
^^ ok closure nothing too special
ok i felt your verse was a little forced and didn't have as many punches as i thought u wouldav had... overall i didn't feel as if u came as hard as u usually do, you had some good wordplay in there and your structure and flow was on point.
mad dog:
So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
^^ ok personal not really hard hitting good wordplay though
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,*
^^ lol this was good didn't really rhyme but it's the punch that counts decent!
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
^^ lol this was kinda played
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",
^^ nice punch and good wordplay,
so why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack" thugs"
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups",
^^ this was good closure!!
ight i felt u stayed consistant thriough the whole verse and had sum gd punches.. just work on ur structure n then you will be fine...
v/ mad dog for staying consistant and having more original punches..
no hate pzz
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