Voted For: {Propain}
good battle imma break it down...
Snow:
'Pain's Raw??', Not even If I cut you N 'Squashed the Beef'
Slice this Warm Blooded herb wit chainsaws, thas the only time U 'Droppin Heat!..'
nice.... good filler and decent opener
And You Can't Go Along with Beef, like a Malt that Freezed
Much Less Swallow Beef, cus I punch out ya grill like Obie, 'Got Some Teeth!?'
ok i spsoe not really feelin it
No you Aint Snow, n Not Rain, but you wanna Be Ill
But See, Im Known to Stop Pain, like Morpheine Pills
ok doesnt flow as good and not rlly a punch more self glorification
I Can See Your Losin, So C'mon..Play the Game
Dont U Know?, Comedy Movies is the Only Time You're 'Major, Pain'
lol this was good
Watch as you Come Short wit 'Stretched Punches' N Played Flows
You Cant Win, Cus me bringin Fire's the only way Propain Blows
that is decent nameplay and goode closure
ight i felt u had a ok verse... u had some good shit in there just match up your syllable count and it will flow good try to think of better concepts for yuor punches and you'll be fine fam... not a bad drop though
propain:
..Kids afraid to show his face, you scared to Step Ya Hoe...
...Cuz in this battle there will be no sign of snow like weather in Mexico..!
^ lol good nameplay wit snow-mexico nice opener
..This is ya last day on earth, every second leave Tomorrow Darkening..
...And you couldnt bring The Heat to the net if ya name was Charles Barkley..!
^^ dont really get it... you should explain punchesl ike this
..I am immortal, but this other human Being Aint Ammounting..
...As Im dropping tracks on Snow like Skeing In The Mountains..!
^^ good punch again
..Cant get a bitch so he sucks dicks, this kid really Blows Yall...
...Cuz friskey winter girls the only time females handling Snow Balls..!
haha this had me laughing thia was a dope punch
..Dude is easily melted from heat, so without effort Ill Decline This Whore..
...Cuz Im always serving pain to this kid while redefining Dine-A-Soar..!
lol good again man decent closure
i felt u came off dtronger in this battle... u had some good shit in there the snow balls like was fucknig hillarious lol structure was good and floew was good i cant really say anything bad about your verse... so keep up the good work fam..
v/ propain for having better punches flow and structure
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