FuxJustAWord
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IP:
Voted For: Premanition
close battle, for real:
So lets start things off by sayin thank fuck this battles in text,
That accent earns no self respect and ya styles technically incorrect,
.....ehhhhhhhhh no punch here, notr feelin this
You a UK citizen spittin like ya from the other side of the pond,
And that shit's irritating i'd rather listen to the Crazy Frog,*
.......lol, that had me rollin, i unno if many people would get it tho
Coz ya shits abismal and annoying tryna bust some Yankee flows,
But it runs off course as much as a three year olds nose,
...... meh, that wasnt any good to me
So it's pretty blatant u'd fail if you were "trialed at 5 clubs",
Coz you couldn't spit at high level if you joined the "mile high club",
.... this was decent
So why you still here strobe should consider bannin these "wack thugs",
Coz you the only legless cripple i know trying them U.K "stand ups",
....lol, ok finish
overall i think u needa work on droppin punches..... u had one or two, but even those didnt hit that hard.... try and be more creative also and not just make statements...
Prem:
1986!....…. Like traditional pics, Mad Dogs a late developer
Struggled convincin ‘little Britain’ how u gon take America?(*)
.......ahhhh this was ok, but the whole link thing took way too long to make it hit hard.... at all
Unaccepted on this black’board’, u screech like damp chalks
& like short memories, u can be sure no ones keepin ‘thoughts’(**)
blah..... ok, but coulda been worded better... alot better
So you escalatin through desperation, the way forward limits
Females neva impressed, only seein big hands watchin minutes
...... ehhh ok i guess
Temporarily embarrassed by the hate and malice towards you
So out came ‘gangstarshit’…
………………………but that wank-kar-bitch destroyed you
.... lol, ok, best line so far
Ya lacking devotion on the mic its shows no emotion connects
Mad Dog I will beat u! ‘I swear on ya life’ & I got turrets!!!
lmao.... only real creative/hard hittin punch i saw in this battle.....
Seriously, i thought this battle was goin to Mad Dog until i saw Prems last two bars..... the finisher really gave u the win in this one..... both of u didnt come played, but neither had any real hard hittin shit in their verse except for Prems last line..... real close battle tho...... this could go either way
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...The real Renegade before Hova...
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