This diss track was weak.

Your lines are stretched.. meaning, your flow fell off as well.

You had a few multis, but you were giving up punches, structure, and flow to get them. You totally messed up your wording by using them.

Your punches didn't hit hard at all. Try to make your set up actually set up your punch. You're set ups had nothing to do with anything. They were just random talking, which made your punches not come close to being effective because 1. you ruined your structure with forced multis and 2. you didn't set anything up.

So, this wasn't very good. Just keep posting and elevating.

Hit this up if you have the time,

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193896