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Old 06-05-05, 10:56 AM   #21
E.C
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ight i aint gonna have time to vote properly so ill just break uit down as easy as i can..

hotshh!

i thought u had some real dope lines in there... good punches decent concepts and some good personals... other lines wernt as hard hitting or not as effective in other words as the other ones here is some lines i liked anyway:

He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough
By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck
^^ this line was dope... not played and very effective

Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters
O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER!
^^ good concept went off star wars and came off wit a dope personal

here are saome lines i didn't like:

"Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted
Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included
^^ this was ok but i wasn't really feeling it as much as the others...

overall im gonna gvie you 86/100

Jack the ripper:

ight i felt u had a real strong verse... good punches not played punches... good structure and flow i didn't think u had one shit punch they were all dope here is 1 bar i liked:


We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away
^^ this was real dope lol... good wordplay aswell

here is 1 bar i didn't like:

Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin
Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in
^^ kinda played but it was alright..

overall imma give you 88/100

this is hard to call becuz both of them had a real good verse but i think imma give it to Jack coz he stayed more concistant and had better wordplay in his verses... pzz

v/ jack
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