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Old 06-06-05, 02:37 PM   #6
PrahJect
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From: BedStuy
IP:

I gradually gaze around me to see piranhas creepily closing in
Put myself in mental prison, paranoia as my sweet, chosen sin
For I feel bold beast’s breathe in my neck, desiring my demise
All alone without any allies, craving for the moon’s dun disguise


This was a hot drop ma....deep shit....Im feelin this. I give it 8.5/10, you real deep. Sentence Structure was on top, imagery was the maint feel IMO....cant be mad at this....holla at my new OM....."let loose" link in sig....
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