Yo man u got real hot flow man....imagery great...sentence structure...try use more word play and multies....

ut of me, but I can still experience pain there’s no change
So vivid u can actually see the bloody words even on the page
No band-aids can stop the bleeding, I just must endure
No healing, no therapy, no remedy there’s merely no cure
Still pain and suffering can come back so its better just kept
Even how difficult it is to swallow the bitter pill and accept

best bit.....7.5/10....return the favor....to my OM "Let Loose"...peaceee...~1~

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