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Old 06-07-05, 05:36 PM   #9
Sixth Sense
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
 
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Curtains closed, lights dimmed, some faintly flickering candles
Escaping satirical scandals, how malignant media mishandles
Empty notepad as my words freely float around in atmosphere
Blocked by brainwashing remarks of sharks eager to profiteer



ok this was way good liked the whole concept the vocabulary was way outstandin and especially the words that u used to describe everythin made me feel a picture in my mind that is very good not alot of ppl can do that this is a very outstandin piece and the lines above i thought were the best in the piece it felt very deep so good job on this piece keep doin what u doin good job
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL
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