Voted For: veyetal

Ikso - Stretched, Stretched, Stretched...Like you have some great concepts in all your lines and everything, but the flow is so far off that it just makes it difficult to read. You have some decent wordplay, some pretty good multies in there and all. Not really any personals or anything...but some solid punches. You need to work on making your lines shorter, so it has a nicer flow to it/have a better structure, and you should be able to come out with some wins..

veyetal - Good verse..Great structure, and flow was right on point. You did your research on this guy and had some great personals on him. Some solid punches in their, with good wordplay...ex. The opener...You also had some good multies within in your verse. Nice hard hitting punches and personals, with a great flow won this battle for you..

Vote: veyetal