Voted For: veyetal

Veyetal-Ha nice Personals and punches bruh. Had some good wordplays. The flow was good, the best aspect in your verse was them wordplays, and punches with t hem personals.

The best bar from your versre was

fuck this fool, wishin' he could ride this one out....not even if you prayed on pedals
this wannabe pulling away with the win?.....not even if it were made of metal
^^ I like that good ass wordplay bruh.

FOr those (Ikso) dont know....Magento has the power to pull metal things...K? Good.


Ikso- Aiight bruh, to tell you the truth, that was sloppy. Not only the structure. The wordplays was Nice, but the punches and your wording was BLAH!. Nice wordplays but you need to word your sentences to make it a effective punch. And You had no personals was so ever, None.


Overall=Meh this was a good battle, well blah. Veyetal had a nice verse with punches them set up lines was sik man hot damn. Uh the wordplays was nice, the personals you had made your punces more effective. Ikso, man you had good ass wordplays but you need to word your sentences to Punches, it was str8 wordplays with a little effective punches, and you had no personals making your Punches more weaker...So my vote goes to Veyeral.....Peace.

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