Voted For: veyetal
`Rock ya head’ till your fukkin `dome shakes’, kuz after this you’ll `never be the same` like `two snowflakes’
Your` two week’ like poor `room mates’, Bitch hows the gore taste! I’ll make this slut bow down till the whole floor breaks!
^^good flow/setup was long thou, punch was on the weak side
I `rip threw more veyens/vines’ then `tarzan’,Burn ya fist till your palms spand,kuz your punches `poorer’ than `boxers on far lands’
I `float threw streets’ while your jus `waitin ta make moves’ like `car jams’,im a `beast’ wit Lines while your like hermaphadites..Only `part Man’!
^^decent, but again setup n punch last relevency with eachother,but punch got better from ya opener
Rip `V’s neck’ worse than being `careless wit white T’s’, keep ya `chin up’ when you fight me kuz I ‘take more jaws out’ than pochers and `shark sightings’.(jaws/movie)
^^nice, punch lacked personal, but best yet...cuz it was stretched like the others
If this battle was a `brand of condom’ I must be `Ruffyn the beating’, im `playin willows’ wit him the way I’ll `stump-in/stompin your weeping’*
This chump is a weakling, my fist have ya `voice box’ doin more work than `def children when speaking’!
^^koo, nice setup, punch was ehh...
This like livin in the hood..your lifes toast!`walk all over your bars’ wit out `payin attention’ like `drunk men wit blind folds’
I out `shine most`, and this bitch isn’t near `the light’ like `dorfs reaching 4 light bulbs’, I fukkin knife skulls,and ` demand more bones’ than ‘burglars leavin heist notes’~!**
^^decent closer, feeling the setup but punch was iffy
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alot of forced punches n vocab that was ok, but not needed n had
no real point of being there, all your setups couldve been more
personalized n capitalized with the punches you used..
nontheless, nice verse...but thats not really 5 bars..lol...more like ten
your lucky i kno how to read this type of text cuz other may
try nDQ you for going over the line limit... nice job
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came over from another bored, cause ik's verses placed them all to sleep
leave, cause the only 'flava' you'll be having here...is the taste of defeat
^^decent opener/punch lacked n didnt connect thou
spring on this bitch, he'll be fall'in back quick, ik better be'leaves'
he's hands down the greatest because thats all his verses ever recieve
^^nice play off his sig, good wording too,nice punch
never achieve fame, like sitting in the stands, iks'so apart from the game
but i bet he can leave a crowd roaring..........the start of his name!
^^decent, IMO it couldve been worded more effectively...
what a lame, '~EaSy~'? well you could give up now if thats what you prefer to do
nice rules, if only you were in a crew i could say they all referred to you
^^i wasnt feelin it ...weak all around bar
fuck this fool, wishin' he could ride this one out....not even if you prayed on pedals
this wannabe pulling away with the win?.....not even if it were made of metal
^^got the concept n what you tried to do but the 1st half of
your second bar threw it right off....n punch was good, needed some reworded perhaps
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overall you started out good, had a couple nice bars but
that crew/you bar was weak i think ..sig play was nice
that bar along with a consistent verse got you my vote, it was close...props to both