Voted For: Sakim Aerias

ight i aint really good wit topicals in this so imma do my best i aint gonna break it down line by line coz i aint got much time famz... i cant vote on the other battle coz drakel is in my crew so im voting on this one....

rev:

i liked this verse i had ok emotion... vocab was ight pretty good but not basic... your lines were good and u got your story across... structure wasn't great neither was the flow... that was your biggest flaw in you verse i must say told u i aint good at explaining these lol... sry fam


Tweety:

u went deep into this topic, went into different aspects of colour which i liked alot... your vocab was better than revs, emotion was dope and flow was good... the only problem i thought of with this is that some of your lines were a bit stretched it aint that bad but that was the only flaw i could make out in your verse..


god battle... i'm giving this to tweety for having more emotion better vocab and a better understanding of the topic...

hope this helps guys pz and no hate...

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