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Voted For: artĂ-stica~Mente
this was a dope battle i enjoyed both peices alot... both did a good job but it comes down to this...
Drakel:
this was a good piece, very emotional you had good vocab, flow was amazing on this good job, you just lack the experiance that u need but it is a good piece, i felt u stayed on track throughout your whole verse well done, here is 1 line i felt stood out from the rest:
its moving, you create an atmosphere so perfect, theres nothing to debate
as if my life blooms new happiness from your bliss that fits ideally in place
^^ this blew me away litterally, it give me the image that its all peceful and happy... nice
good job man just keep dropping em and you will be one of the top topicals writers on this site...
Tweety:
what can i say u never fail to drop dope, emotion is always deep and always anger lol, i like reading your topicals... vocab is good, flow is ight not too bad but its a little choppy in places, you always go deep down into the subject which is always a plus, you take things further than most people would good job... here is one line i felt stood out from the rest:
My eyes drip in red, with angry veins coursing to my pupil…How could you?
I loved you…our heart was red, our future was violet, and here you stand blue.
^^ this is a dope image of being angry using colours lol very creative...
ight good job tweety keep droppin them things man...
imma give this to tweety for having a more emotional piece, better images of whats going on and better vocab...
drakel you did good fam but i thought tweeties was better
no hate pzz
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