Voted For: Devolve

ight this is how i see it...

Devolve:

i liked this alot... you went deep into your topic explaining wit emotion whats happening and everything i enjoyed it every much. you need to work on yuor flow in some parts that is important i think, your vocab was very good, u stayed on the subject and gave a thoughur understanding of what was happening... here is one bar i think stood out from the rest:

Beckoning screeches of agony, sharp stabs of cold penetrate.
Lashing havoc batter the shores, hold back, reign & dictate.
^^ this was real good, this is where the waves hit am i right?

overall i felt you had a real strong verse for this well done keep droppin em man....


(stanza):

ight i thought your verse was good but i didn't think u showed some emotion until near the end which was a big flaw, try to go deep into your topic so u can get a better understanding, other than that the flow was good and your vocab was real good, just try to go deeper in your topics and show more emotion... here is one bar i think stood out from the rest:

So I Treid my best To out Run This Infernal Insanity
But every Move I Made It Stayed above Me In vanity
^^ this was easliy your best line had good vocab and this was kinda deep and u showed emotion

ight man u did alright but not as good as devolve so thats why i'm giving it to him,

v/ devolve for having a more indepth verse and showing more emotion in it..


rtf on any battle in my sig pz

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