Evolution
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
ight this was a pretty weak battle but this is how i see it...
khaoz:
You certainly aint no Man, ur pussy, all u ever do iz Wyfe Beat*
Cook whack beef in a easy bake oven, so how u expectin 2 bring Heat?**
^^ ok opener good personal wack punch 6/10
Take a seat, learn from the master, nope i wont-Blast-Ya
Elevation course is a 1 horse Race, wit me Flyin-Past-ya
^^ self glorification, kind of a punch 5.5/10
U come up shorter than the Jockey, Racin without a Whip
Bitch ur nothin more than a Sodomized Teen..Cuz u juz been Ripped!
^^ lol at the first line ok second line 6.5/10
18/30
ight man your verse was pretty weak but you did what u needed to do man.. and thats it really i no u can do better ive seen u do better so i aint gonna fret...
k-trini:
This ain't even a battle to me,cause ur one a my fans/
You couldn't smoke an emcee,with tobacco in his pants/
^^ wtf.. y wud sum 1 have tobacco in their pants lol 3/10
U like a pencil sharpener,cause you waste pencil lead/
Doc say ya need a new kidney,so ya break a childs leg/
ehh dont get it... 3/10
Now look at wat you did,I' can't even hear myself speak/
Cause your rhymes so boring it's put my ears to sleep/
nope not feelin it wack... 2/10
8/30
ay man u need to elevate alot flow and structure were good punches were blah u need to think of good concepts for your punches and u need to word them better soon as u do that you'll be on your way...
v/ khaoz for having a better verse in all aspects pz
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