I love your style for real, vocab was on point combined with excellent imagery and pure emotion. I am feeling the concept you went with here, for some people it might be a bit hard to understand because you use terms from the mythology and Ancient Egypt and all that ish but I felt it gave the poem something extra, that lil touch that a lot of poems miss you know.

Keep it up!

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