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*Screams Of Silence*
IP: C1B3 89A4
Begone ye screams of silence, harbingers of pain, Cloaked in isolation, you mock in harsh disdain, My soul is torn usunder, I curse you God of Hell, As you pierced my tortured soul, what horrors I befell, You spoke of quiet solitude, to tempt me to your lair, Then lanced me in my troubled heart to depths of dark despair. Nemesis, I beg of thee, rise up in righteous ire, Protect me from Tisiphone, from Hell's eternal fire, With all my voice I scream to you, protect me from the night, Alas, in desperation, I journey to the light, Banished to mind's coventry, I heed the demon's call, Beckoned by the silent screams, I enter Dante's Hall, Drawn into the vortex, I hope and pray to find, Total absolution, illusions of the mind? Drowning in disharmony, upon a tranquil sea, Adrift upon the river Styx, am blind but yet I see, Bowing to Mephistopheles, as Faust I sell my soul, Unto the Fallen Angels, at last I cede control, On bended knee I enter, the world of waking dreams, Final absolution, farewell to silent screams. |
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Damn...this was a dope ass drop. Vocab was nice, emotion was very nice, and it's very apparent that you know about your topic...the references to mythological beings and places...excellent.
"On bended knee I enter, the world of waking dreams," "Final absolution, farewell to silent screams." ^^^....Lovin this Overall...10/10 |
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IP: C1B3 89A4
thanks. man. well in poems i consider myself in a higher level of thinking. i really put work in it. uppin for more.
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Odi et Amo
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I love your style for real, vocab was on point combined with excellent imagery and pure emotion. I am feeling the concept you went with here, for some people it might be a bit hard to understand because you use terms from the mythology and Ancient Egypt and all that ish but I felt it gave the poem something extra, that lil touch that a lot of poems miss you know.
Keep it up! ![]() Rtf if you have time on any of the links in my sig...
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IP: C1B3 89A4
iiight thanks. really appreciate.
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Blow Me
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wow this piece was very good.. man ur very consistent on your drops and they all seem to hit pretty hard...... good job
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IP: C1B3 89A4
thanks, i do my best
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IP: C1B3 89A4
yes he is. .
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lmao at you biting
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