Voted For: AckRite

this was an ok battle imma have to break it down real quick coz i gta go for my exam lol so sorry if its rushed.....


khaoz...

you had an alright verse wordplay was there there was some punches but they just needed to be worded better fam... just work on your punches first when u have got your punch then focuz on word play you'll be alot better... your structure is pretty messed up though nopthing that can't be sorted out flow was ok in some parts... u have got alot to work on fam....


ackrite:

ur verses always make me laugh lol u had some humour in there and your concepts are never played... try to focuz your punches for better use and make your set up lines more relevent to the punch intself it was your personals that gave u this win i must say they were pretty funny...

ight this was an ok battle but imma have to give this to ackrite becuz his personals killed it and his punches were worded better.....

khaoz man soon as u work on them thingz i said then u'll be dope as son... good job in this though... you were unlucky...

v/ ackrite...

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