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Old 06-10-05, 09:46 PM   #11
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
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Voted For: (Stanza)



Stanza:

Why Must I Continue To Battle These Wack Monkey Children
This Dude Mad Bcuz My Lyrics Tears him Down Like Buildings
Ugh...4/10
Yo Crackheads Pass Your Dope Down Bcuz its not worth Smokin
This Is a Typed Text Battle Dude....So Why the Hell You Chokin?
Ok..5/10
Well I Thought You hade Some Skills But I Can See Through You
Bcuz You couldnt Add Up To My Skills With my Rymes Times Two
Blah..4/10
Fucking Roachez Easily Everytime You Zoned Out, Come Back To Life
I Screwed N' Chopped Yo Wife Like Houston Music & Paul Wall At The Mic
LoL..Not Hard Hitting but Aight..5/10
Eternity Is a Long time Dude So Pull Out Your Ruler And Lets Measure
His rymes Could be A Ho On The Job and He still couldnt Provide Pleasure
Decent..6/10

Overall: 24/50

Freeze_In_Hell:

Fuck a ‘stanza’…u don’t deserve one line in my sonnet
Claims hes ’pro’ but the only winners in ‘NC’ was a ’college’
Wack..Irrelevant 3/10
Gain some knowledge, get your skill up, and quit bein a fan
I guess its hard to break the habit when u named yourself after ‘stan’(za)
Not A Good Name Flip and Wack..3/10
I know ‘cokeheads throwin up’ could ‘spit an iller line’ than u (get it!)
Only reason u fill the ‘seats’, cause none of rapverse can ‘stand’ u
Alright Meta and Punch..5/10
I guess ima be the one to leave a ‘2’ in your ‘losses place’
Cause the only time ya rhymes is ‘tite’, is when u ‘runnin out a space’
Blah..Ok..4/10
So just put up the pen, and lay ya notebook on the shelf
Cause the only time ppl liked ya ‘spits’ is when u ‘drowned’ yourself
Decent...5/10

Overall: 20/50

My Vote - Stanza For Harder Hitting Punches and Consistency

~R~