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Old 06-11-05, 10:45 AM   #12
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Voted For: King Solo

You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater
The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water
^not understanding how da water thing izza diss?

You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes
Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes
^1st line wuz weak 2nd wuz ok

Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me
You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth?
^dat wuz nyce

Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In
Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn
^nyce concept, horribly worded 4 real

Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell
Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell
^very weak

wordplay wuz 2 basic, nuthin original or nuthin dat caught my attention & wanted 2 read again, try being more creative


Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping..
Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping..
^decent wordplay, real nyce pun in da second line

Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand..
Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned)
^weakest bar in yo verse

Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’..
Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry..
^nuthin special but it wuz a better concept than most ov stanzas flow

S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game..
^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name..
^highlight ov da battle, really creative concept & wordplay

Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’…
Even stanza isn’t sure about himself……………………………….
………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets..
^
good first line, da personal in da 2nd wuz weak

U had da much better verse, wordplay wuz more complex & creative then stanza & yo punz hit alot harder, nuthin 2 personal dat made him look lyke a fool, but u styll got diz EZ..

vote=king solo-much more creative wordplay & da punchlines were more complex & harder hitting...plz rtf
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