Voted For: kid~ca$

ermm iu dont no what to say... i would break this down but big_dawg had the most awful structure i have ever seen...

kid ca$:

u murdered him easily punches hit and they were consistant... wordplay wasnt really good but you had some punches which is a plus... flow was decent and your structure was good also... just try to elevate on youyr punches find better concepts and word your punches better other than that your verse was solid good job fam...

big_dawg:

damn man this was awful fix your punches structure flow wordplay and your consistancy, coz im sorry for saying this but it was real wack fam... try to put your lines like this:

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so it will be easier to read an make people enjoy it more trust me... u need to elevate on your punches like i said to da$ think of punches that are relevent to the battle not about cash n shit thats wank so ye focus on them things and you'll get better.....

v/ ca$ for having a more consistant verse

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