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Old 06-12-05, 01:51 PM   #12
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Voted For: kid~ca$

ight imma break this one down....

P.R.E.P:

kid~ca$'s face is more than just odd, no-one’s supporting this fraud
His frame’s a distorted façade, while I’m hated like porcelain Gods/
^^ good flow weak punch
This battle’s a ‘board game’,so i gota play this sucka/
The matchup is P.R.E.P. vs. kid~ca$…he's just another haten brotha/
^^ no punch at all.. weak man
Clever wordplay like that is always absent from kid~ca$ writtens/
You’re the product of controlled breeding from an ogre and Scottie Pippen/
^^ ok i spose still a filler
Ugly mutherfucker, he cant rhyme whats wrong with this nigga/
Your thinking cap would be a tight squeeze on an action figure/
^^ this was better fam
I’d help you repair your dated style if I had alot of patience/
Gun talk? bitch You can’t even ‘pump shells’ at the gas station/
^^ this was a good closure best line in your verse..

ok u started off weak and got better as u went on... u need to stay consistant and not use fillers instead of punches nah meen? this is a battle we dont want to no who your battlnig in your rhymes get me?

Kid Ca$:


Take that dikk out yo mouth,and whipe of yo chin….
ca$ bout to separate your rymes like a simease twin…..
^^ platyed concept weak opener
in ric bz o.m u say he should unload tha glock
he gonna take after you??and unload dudes cock
^^ you already got at gayness
I how u even plan on winnin,must have a ghost writer….
future couldn’t be brighter,if u had a job as a fire fighter
^^ now were off ok punch nice concept couldav been worded better
I rip kidz like u for kickz,like fat bitches rip tight jeans…..
Youl never be sik and it aint because of monthly vaccines
^^ ok played concept though
Talk bout str8 aim that’s funny,take a look at yo self…..
read yo verse in disses n shit,then imediately seek help
^^ im sure ive herd tht in one of your battles
prep is for Penises.Ramed.Everywhere.Possible….
come up short like midgets on a height obsticle....
^^ nameplay.. errr ok i spose
tha way u rap itz just like sumthin must be holdin u bak
but u froze,your cool?mabe holdin a thousand ice packz
^^ ok punch needs to be worded better
im done wastin my lines on this kid,waste of my time...
your garbage,yo dogg aint u know litering is a crime....
^^ nah... not a good closure

ok your verse was better than p.r.e.ps but it was still weak.. you have the opunches all you need to do now is to word them better and you'll be on your way... hit up a few vets battles and then find a style stick to it... see how they word their punches and then u will pick up things as u go along...

v/ Ca$ for having a more consistent and more enjoyable verse... with better punches
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