Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
ight this was a one sided battle if you ask me...
barz of steel:
I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is
^ straight to da point lol made ma laugh
So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"
^^ nice nameplay here...
I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"
^^ dope wordplay nice punch fam
So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"
^^ lol nice again man this is dope
All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"
^^ ok not as good as the others
This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"
^^ haha thats true lol my mum said that too
lol
overall fam i felt you had a solid drop... dope metas wordplay and some dope punches fam, flow was real good and structure was good also... nothing really wrong wit it. i just felt that your punches got worse as they went on... they were still good but u lost consistancy try to stay up on your battles your gonig good keep it up...
ghost:
Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
^^ ermm not a good opener really weak punch
Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
^^ ermm not feeling this one again fam
Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
^^ i used athelti and pathetic in my daubs bvattle u copy cat
Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
^^ ok wordplay but weak punch
Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz
^^ this was the best bar in your whole verse
ight man ive seen u drop better... not a good verse really punches were weak and your strucutre was weak in the battle to... you had one good bar and that was it fam... sorry but u need to stay consistant and have punches all the way through
v/ barz of steel
for having a better verse it was more enjoyable and made me laugh
yo rtf and one of my battles... if u do nmot rtf then u will have this vote removed.... pz