Voted For: {Propain}

On snap this was a dope topical

1st of all Denied Truth -
I really enjoyed the creativity in the middle adapting it to slavery with some good imagery

Well Years Have Passed But Ima Captive Of This Time Frame
Forced To Pick Cotton, Grow Tobaco, N Harvest Brown Grain

Felt the flow was ok, needed to incorperate some multi's to help it smoother but i suppose its not worht sacrificing the content
Good drop

Climax -

I thought ur story was dope, no real flaws, some nice metaphors

I stand in the spotlights, surrounded by trigger Happy Feds
Covered in cross-hairs, and I aint talking Nappy Heads

Flow was nicer cus didnt have multis still but shorter lines still incorperating the creativity

Overall this was mos def close but ima have 2 give this to propain for a more enjoyable read

Respect to both

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