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Old 06-14-05, 04:46 PM   #4
E.C
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Voted For: Cuban~Storm

ermm this was a weak battle... but cuban easily got this....


cuban:

A win for you is impossible in this battle here today
Cuz there is a much betta chance of finding a cure for aids
^^ played concept but worded ok
I wonder how sick a bitch can be, wit out having a fatal disease
To the point that he has to have a warning sign saying beware of me*
^^ this was ok i spose not really hard hitting
For no other reason, that his extreme wackness can be contagious
Cuz at the end you’ll be making stories how you and the pave-ments**
^^ unique but still wack lol

overalll i thought u had a weak verse but it had some form of punches in which was good... all u need to do is word your punches better and then think of better concepts then you'll be on your way....

Tha Sick One:

Cuban~'Storm', nothin but a little 'rain drop'/
even worse hes 'Cuban' keeps tryna 'border hop'/
^^ WTF!! lol this was wack
'Cuba' let him leave the country, cuz he was Bonin 'Castro'/
Fidel told lil cuban, 'sit on my lap', you know where ya 'ass'-go/
^^ not feeling it
poor little Cuban~Storm or Lethal 'Luna-tik'/
ya 'crazy' you crossed tha ocean, 'ridin' on some dudes 'dick'/
not not good again..

ight man u have got alot of elevating to do... think of some punches before you battle again... thats the best advice i can give u fam...

v/ cuban for having better punches and a more enjoyable verse....

rtf... links in the sig... if u dont return the favour then i will have this vote removed... pz

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed
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