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Old 06-14-05, 08:57 PM   #8
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Voted For: {Propain}

Iight its like this:

{Propain}:

Really nice verse here fam. Really great emotion and imagery. You described it so well, I could see the story happening in my head, which is a major plus! Flow was fine, this would sound real nice on audio, but anyways, you did a really nice job on this topic man, I am really impressed.

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This verse was not good at all. You lacked emotion and good story telling, because you kept switching what you were talking about, and your verse had no depth to it, so basically, it was just boring. Imagery wasn't that good, because at times it was hard to follow your story line. Flow was fine however, I'll give you that, but this verse was just weak.

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