So much imagary *cries*...lol....on the real liked ya multies imagery ya stayed on topic ya whole verse was so good I would want to read it twice and thats good cuz I dont like to read you're intro made me one to read more and it felt like it was ghettiin more intresting by the more it went on ya closure was nice I liked the thing about the "cuban" guy(*cries, why did it have to be cuban) lol j/k

You're verse was good very good exellent, marolous, etc

GOOD TOPICAL