This was tight. The best category of this piece had to be the imagery and good number of multis you had...This was raw.

I can feel the blood dripping on my back with the pain similar to a bee
My body Shivers. My lips are chap, vibrating so quivery. Tears leak

Wow, this was really nice right here. It had everything, nice imagery and shit. I was really feeling the emotion right here. This also interested me in the piece so I wanted to read on. Good way to open this.

Well, good overall piece and keep it coming.

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