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Old 06-18-05, 01:24 AM   #8
M&rk
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dont like havin to wait to the third verse cuz this is some hippy shit... i dont like ya emotion on this song but u had good lyrics and decent flow u just dont really sound that good after hearin the first two and how they emotion was on point for the song... decent drop just need different emotion so u dont sound like u did...

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