Dayum...this was deep.Really enjoyable read.Vocab was on point..structure was good...and the emotion was crazy...cant really say anything bad.You deffo got mad talent at writin..good to see another good topical head join the site...i liked the way you wrote about your dream...worked it real well...i dont really rate pieces..if i enjoy it then i enjoy it..and i really enjoyed this...keep em comin mami...you should try out for R.A.W aswell if u decide to hook up with a crew...its in the crew forums..jus say i sent ya...

sorry to hear about your friend aswell...im sure she'd be proud if she read this...R.I.P Desiree...wun

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