Evolution
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Voted For: Dizzee Rascal
umm a 1 sided battle here if u ask me...
dizzee... you had some dope lines in there, nice wordplay and some real dope punches... flow and structure were good, personals were decent fam... here is 1 bar i did like:
Advance wiv ur stretched shit just another fake fighter
Cus ill leave ur Appendix 'present' like 'gifted' gay writers
^^ lol mad wordplay in this man thios was your dopest line easy...
wayne... man u need to fix up on alot of things your multie4s are ight but they are pointless they aint gonna win u battles... punches do and i didn't really see any decent punches in there the first line was self glorification so naa not feeling it really, i couldn't tell where your lines end n shit u need to fix up on that... lose the multies and look up punches you'll get better wit time...
v/ dizzee he had alot better punches more creative lines better wordplay and a more enjoyable verse ... pz
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